2. the music needs to be improved- more music during the second half
3.the heart beat sound effect needs to be louder
4.there are too many random close ups
5.some of the shots need to be shorter
6. the jump scare needed to be improved
7. the narrative of the trailer was slightly confusing
8. the trailer needs more shots of the psychopath
9. the continuity of the swing wasn't quite right
10. music was a little too slow
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